Go over "There Will Come Soft Rains":
Bradbury style alike: Motifs, senses, description, tonal shift.
Course Questions: #1, 3.
"Footloose" newspaper article:
Find ALL the mistakes...
x,y, and z. (y,and= oxford comma).
You can't start a sentence with a conjunction. (FANBOYS)
times [sic].
SENTENCE COMBINING STRATEGIES:
- Em-Dash: Used to indicate an interruption of thought.
- If you were going to -- if you dictated what we spoke -- like I'm using them right now -- you would need a lot of em-dashes. (first em-dash is causing a "re-start", other two work together.)
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